Elevator Pitch No 3
Here is the link to my elevator pitch
https://youtu.be/UcZDb3mfZa8
2. Some of the feedback that I got from the last pitch said that I should try to include less content, and move at a slower pace. Other feedback that I got on my last elevator pitch said that I chose a good angle and the lighting was good. Another commenter on my last elevator pitch said that I did a good job of getting my ideas across clearly
3. I did not change much based on the feedback that I got. I tried to retain all of the good aspects that were mentioned about my last elevator pitch, and I feel that I did that well. I also tried to slow down with this pitch. I feel that this made this pitch easier to understand. I also feel that this made this pitch more enjoyable to listen to.
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ReplyDeleteHey Cooper, I've really enjoyed watching the progression of your elevator pitch. Each time we've done this assignment, we receive feedback and getting this advice really does make a difference in our pitches. It's awesome to see how you're hearing your classmates out and building upon your pitch to make the best possible presentation. Speaking at a slower pace really does help the message resonate and I think you did a great job of that this time. Great post!
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