Elevator Pitch No. 2
Link to the elevator pitch: https://youtu.be/x_TxRpRBu2Y
2.) Although I did not get much feedback on my last elevator pitch, the feedback that I did receive was helpful. One of the comments that was made was that I should change the camera angle when recording my pitch, which I thought was a good idea. Another comment that was made was that I should add a hook at the beginning of the hook, which is a good idea to grab the listeners attention
3.) I changed the camera angle to better represent an angle that might be realistic when talking to someone in person. I also added a hook at the beginning of my pitch, which I think added a nice touch and
Hey Cooper, I thought you did a great job speaking clearly and really getting your thoughts across vividly. Furthermore, your body language was confident and strong which created a strong presentation for the audience. One thing I would say you could work on is removing unneeded information from your pitch and get right down to the details and purpose of your pitch. Great job!
ReplyDeleteHey Cooper, enjoyed watching your elevator pitch. One thing I feel like you did a very good job with was how you spoke. Less content at a slower pace is the most effective way to speak because it makes what you say resonate, so always just include the most vital information. Aside from that, I think you did a great job learning from past feedback and implementing it into this pitch. Great job!
ReplyDeleteExcellent pitch. I enjoyed your use of real world experience in your process. Additionally, camera angle was enough, and the mood you created (lower lighting, dressed some what casual) will aide in your capturing the demographic of interest. Perhaps some indication of your professional experiences, or what has prepared you to be the go-to resource for this need would add an additional level of credibility. Overall, good pitch.
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